Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is here with yet another Friday Fictioneer flash fiction challenge. The photo prompt this week is courtesy of Roger Bultot.
The Silencer
He looked out into the dull grey sky at the flock of pigeons roosting atop the power lines. Their constant prattling was annoying him. Picking up his rifle, he took aim and squeezed the trigger.
Smeared in blood, the bird dropped onto the pavement flapping its wings uncontrollably writhing in pain before it stiffened. The other birds flapped away in a frenzy at the blasting sound.
Bobby smirked at the sight of the dead bird. He had silenced it, just like he had silenced his wife.
He turned and walked into their bedroom to admire her rigid body yet again.
[Word Count: 100]
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Great job on the set up and surprise twist. 🙂
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Thank you, Josyln 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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I hope the birds take matters in their own hands and revenge the fallen bird and Bobby’s wife
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Well, we have a whole flock remaining! 😀
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Creepy characterization of a killer. Well written!
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Thank you, Amy! 🙂
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Eek, that guy creeps me out. Great build-up with describing the death of the bird, getting the reader all horrified and sad, and then the truth about his madness…
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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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A well framed offering, silence is golden in his book it seems.
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Indeed!
Thank you, Mike! 🙂
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Please convince me this is just fiction – that there aren’t people like this. Good writing.
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I wish I could convince you that, but then it would be a lie. Unfortunately, such people do exist in out world. A sad fact is life!
Thank you for reading 🙂
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Bobby is definitely a sick man. Very deranged! Excellent work
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Thank you, Jacque!
Bobby definitely needs help! 😀
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I am featuring you on Friday friends today!
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Oh my God! That is really sweet of you, Lynz! Thank you so much, I appreciate it 🙂
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Dear Rashmi,
Bobby is one sick puppy. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for reading, Rochelle. 🙂
Bobby is indeed very sick, he needs help! 🙂
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Wow! That packed a wallop. I sure didn’t see it coming.
Good job! 🙂
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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You are most welcome.
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It was a good story but a very scary one. Not someone I’d particularly want to meet, that’s for sure.
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No, he isn’t friend material..you should steer clear of him! 😀
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Wow, very graphic and then turning very dark. Not a man to cross (or marry)! Great use of the word “admire” in your last sentence – that says everything we need to know about his mental state.
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Yes, he is not a man you want to cross, Bobby has deep seated issues!
Thank you for reading 🙂
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:-O Speechless! And to think you were wondering what story to write….
Brilliantly written.
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Thank you! Was trying my hand at writing something dark. 🙂
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A very dangerous man with deep seated problems! His anger is beyond control right now. It is very sad his wife was in his path of destruction.
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True! He has deep seated issues which is why he refuses to bury his wife and continues to keep her in their bedroom.
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It’s so sad.
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It is! Thank you for reading 🙂
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